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Linda's Portret

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A portret of a good friend who will be moving abroad in a short while. I'll miss her!

Pencil/traditional version: [link]
Image size
1591x2250px 1.08 MB
Make
Canon
Model
MP210 series
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goood! the face looks really natural, like a picture :}
the under arm is a little on the short side, I also think her legs are very unnaturally crossed, cross them compleetly or cross them at the ankles. it's a little bit mid movement now, and I do not thing you were going for that... I could be wrong though as she's also leaning foreward a bit and it looks like she is leaning on her arm (then again, her other hand probably shouldn't be on her leg then...)
I am glad to note that previous stiffness in the anatomy has not returned.

the dress is fabulous I like the detail on all the ripples but you're a bit fearfull with shadow, I definatly think you could have added a little more around the chest area, and also a little in the skirt.
also the bust statue, it brings a very nice touch it really looks like stone, but though the column looks really round, I think again, some heavier shading would not have done the bust it self any wrong.
keep an eye on positioning as well, the placement on the floor indicates that it's either just infront of her legs or on the same length as her legs, though the rest of the statue indicates that it is behind her, so I think a little higher in the painting would have been better.

great clouds, ever so slightly and subtle, just like the grass! I understand the extra effort, but I think more flowers on the side, like maybe roses or a bush of daisies would really complete this pic, you know? just a tad more scenery.

one more time, the face is amazing!